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2019年10月24日 02:10

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【<】【p】【>】【阿】【姨】【问】【我】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【天】【上】【的】【彩】【虹】【像】【什】【么】【?】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【我】【说】【,】【彩】【虹】【像】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【中】【的】【一】【枚】【美】【丽】【的】【发】【夹】【,】【像】【玉】【皇】【大】【帝】【的】【天】【兵】【天】【将】【拉】【开】【的】【一】【张】【漂】【亮】【的】【大】【弓】【,】【彩】【虹】【像】【披】【在】【七】【仙】【女】【肩】【上】【的】【七】【彩】【丝】【绸】【,】【还】【像】【那】【三】【头】【六】【臂】【的】【哪】【吒】【脖】【子】【上】【的】【项】【圈】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】感冒发烧【<】【p】【>】【中】【山】【公】【园】【到】【了】【,】【我】【们】【尽】【情】【得】【唱】【啊】【、】【跳】【啊】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【那】【高】【兴】【劲】【就】【别】【提】【了】【。】【下】【午】【,】【老】【师】【带】【领】【我】【们】【去】【看】【菊】【展】【。】【绚】【丽】【多】【彩】【的】【菊】【花】【吸】【引】【着】【老】【师】【和】【同】【学】【,】【大】【家】【簇】【拥】【着】【,】【十】【个】【一】【群】【,】【五】【个】【一】【伙】【,】【观】【赏】【着】【菊】【花】【,】【有】【的】【用】【手】【摸】【摸】【;】【有】【的】【在】【花】【巷】【里】【漫】【步】【;】【有】【的】【弯】【着】【腰】【,】【歪】【着】【头】【,】【品】【味】【着】【花】【的】【芬】【芳】【;】【有】【的】【蹲】【在】【花】【盆】【旁】【,】【留】【下】【倩】【影】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【同】【学】【们】【笑】【逐】【颜】【开】【,】【热】【闹】【极】【了】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【来】【到】【医】【院】【,】【又】【是】【给】【我】【拿】【药】【,】【又】【是】【背】【我】【打】【针】【,】【还】【不】【时】【地】【问】【问】【我】【好】【了】【没】【有】【?】【真】【是】【忙】【里】【忙】【外】【,】【累】【得】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【来】【,】【把】【我】【背】【回】【家】【后】【,】【又】【忙】【着】【去】【给】【我】【熬】【药】【、】【煮】【稀】【饭】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【我】【迷】【迷】【糊】【糊】【地】【睡】【着】【了】【,】【不】【知】【过】【了】【多】【久】【,】【妈】【妈】【端】【来】【药】【给】【我】【喝】【,】【我】【接】【过】【药】【时】【,】【发】【现】【妈】【妈】【额】【头】【上】【有】【细】【细】【的】【汗】【珠】【,】【当】【时】【正】【是】【初】【冬】【呢】【。】【这】【时】【我】【扑】【进】【妈】【妈】【的】【怀】【里】【,】【大】【声】【喊】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【妈】【妈】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【妈】【妈】【拍】【着】【我】【的】【肩】【连】【声】【说】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【傻】【孩】【子】【,】【傻】【孩】【子】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】感冒发烧【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【饶】【有】【情】【趣】【的】【作】【文】【。】【文】【章】【围】【绕】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【展】【开】【。】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【共】【有】【四】【道】【题】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【都】【做】【了】【答】【案】【。】【只】【是】【“】【我】【”】【(】【哥】【哥】【或】【姐】【姐】【)】【对】【这】【些】【答】【案】【并】【不】【满】【意】【,】【有】【的】【则】【不】【同】【意】【,】【也】【有】【不】【理】【解】【的】【。】【借】【助】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【又】【把】【这】【些】【题】【目】【和】【答】【案】【呈】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【,】【让】【那】【些】【做】【老】【师】【的】【,】【做】【父】【母】【的】【,】【包】【括】【所】【有】【做】【长】【辈】【的】【,】【都】【受】【到】【考】【问】【。】【对】【于】【同】【样】【的】【问】【题】【,】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【同】【成】【年】【人】【往】【往】【有】【不】【同】【的】【答】【案】【,】【是】【是】【非】【非】【,】【孰】【对】【孰】【错】【,】【值】【得】【每】【个】【人】【深】【入】【思】【考】【,】【并】【从】【中】【受】【到】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【且】【看】【文】【章】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【 】【天】【津】【树】【人】【中】【学】【 】【任】【翀】【怡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【在】【作】【业】【本】【里】【写】【道】【:】【“】【如】【果】【有】【人】【打】【我】【一】【拳】【,】【我】【就】【要】【还】【他】【一】【拳】【。】【”】【这】【是】【弟】【弟】【用】【“】【如】【果】【…】【…】【就】【…】【…】【”】【造】【的】【一】【句】【话】【,】【被】【老】【师】【打】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【惊】【叹】【号】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【拿】【起】【作】【业】【本】【,】【望】【着】【字】【迹】【工】【整】【的】【造】【句】【说】【:】【“】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【处】【世】【尚】【浅】【,】【很】【多】【道】【理】【你】【不】【懂】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【却】【托】【起】【下】【巴】【反】【驳】【我】【:】【“】【我】【怎】【么】【不】【懂】【。】【学】【校】【里】【做】【过】【天】【平】【实】【验】【,】【右】【边】【添】【上】【几】【个】【砝】【码】【,】【左】【边】【也】【得】【添】【上】【几】【个】【砝】【码】【。】【别】【人】【打】【我】【,】【我】【就】【还】【手】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【时】【无】【言】【以】【对】【,】【因】【为】【我】【感】【到】【有】【所】【触】【动】【,】【以】【至】【于】【不】【想】【把】【那】【些】【世】【故】【的】【道】【理】【灌】【进】【这】【颗】【纯】【洁】【的】【童】【心】【,】【只】【能】【呆】【望】【着】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【以】【后】【,】【每】【当】【我】【看】【到】【街】【上】【有】【人】【大】【打】【出】【手】【,】【我】【就】【会】【想】【起】【弟】【弟】【的】【造】【句】【,】【不】【禁】【哑】【然】【失】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【“】【组】【词】【造】【句】【”】【里】【有】【这】【样】【一】【道】【题】【—】【—】【写】【一】【句】【话】【,】【其】【中】【必】【须】【提】【到】【窗】【。】【我】【指】【导】【他】【说】【:】【“】【眼】【睛】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【立】【刻】【反】【对】【:】【“】【眼】【睛】【怎】【么】【能】【是】【心】【灵】【的】【窗】【户】【,】【心】【里】【有】【话】【,】【眼】【睛】【能】【表】【达】【吗】【?】【我】【觉】【得】【嘴】【巴】【才】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【,】【心】【里】【有】【话】【就】【能】【讲】【出】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【哑】【口】【无】【言】【了】【。】【弟】【弟】【写】【道】【:】【“】【嘴】【巴】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【太】【小】【,】【尚】【不】【懂】【得】【措】【词】【之】【美】【,】【但】【他】【却】【能】【用】【嘴】【巴】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【学】【校】【让】【每】【个】【学】【生】【都】【谈】【各】【自】【的】【理】【想】【。】【弟】【弟】【为】【这】【犯】【了】【愁】【,】【跑】【来】【问】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【长】【大】【后】【,】【你】【想】【不】【想】【当】【科】【学】【家】【、】【文】【学】【家】【、】【艺】【术】【家】【或】【者】【做】【博】【士】【,】【戴】【博】【士】【帽】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【坚】【决】【地】【回】【答】【:】【“】【不】【想】【,】【博】【士】【帽】【不】【好】【看】【,】【还】【不】【如】【我】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【发】【觉】【问】【下】【去】【也】【没】【什】【么】【意】【思】【,】【难】【道】【在】【孩】【子】【们】【心】【中】【,】【代】【表】【学】【识】【的】【博】【士】【帽】【真】【就】【不】【如】【一】【顶】【普】【通】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【?】【难】【怪】【很】【多】【成】【年】【人】【喜】【欢】【回】【忆】【童】【年】【,】【回】【忆】【那】【段】【没】【有】【任】【何】【功】【利】【色】【彩】【的】【岁】【月】【,】【那】【片】【成】【年】【人】【无】【法】【介】【入】【的】【乐】【土】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【,】【弟】【弟】【只】【想】【做】【个】【快】【乐】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【或】【者】【,】【弟】【弟】【更】【想】【做】【个】【能】【让】【别】【人】【快】【乐】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【匆】【忙】【跑】【到】【我】【跟】【前】【,】【让】【我】【帮】【他】【检】【查】【作】【业】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【是】【组】【量】【词】【训】【练】【,】【弟】【弟】【写】【道】【:】【“】【一】【(】【位】【)】【蚂】【蚁】【,】【一】【(】【名】【)】【甲】【虫】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【望】【着】【这】【些】【搭】【配】【不】【当】【的】【词】【语】【,】【我】【严】【肃】【地】【质】【问】【他】【为】【何】【这】【样】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【什】【么】【也】【不】【说】【了】【,】【拿】【着】【本】【子】【回】【了】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【,】【样】【子】【有】【点】【委】【屈】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【刚】【才】【的】【话】【过】【重】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【聊】【间】【,】【我】【打】【开】【电】【视】【。】【呀】【!】【竟】【是】【久】【违】【的】【动】【画】【片】【,】【我】【饶】【有】【兴】【趣】【地】【看】【着】【,】【什】【么】【“】【熊】【先】【生】【”】【“】【狼】【外】【婆】【”】【,】【让】【我】【有】【重】【拾】【童】【心】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【顿】【时】【明】【白】【了】【,】【弟】【弟】【写】【得】【一】【点】【也】【没】【错】【,】【蚂】【蚁】【确】【实】【可】【以】【论】【位】【,】【甲】【虫】【也】【确】【实】【可】【以】【论】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【到】【这】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【想】【起】【了】【西】【西】【。】【西】【西】【是】【一】【位】【童】【心】【未】【泯】【的】【香】【港】【女】【作】【家】【,】【今】【年】【刚】【好】【6】【0】【岁】【,】【她】【写】【了】【一】【首】【非】【常】【有】【趣】【的】【诗】【叫】【《】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【》】【。】【在】【诗】【中】【,】【她】【大】【胆】【发】【问】【:】【“】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【枚】【白】【菜】【一】【块】【鸡】【蛋】【 】【一】【只】【葱】【 】【一】【个】【胡】【椒】【粉】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【架】【飞】【鸟】【 】【一】【管】【柳】【子】【树】【一】【顶】【太】【阳】【一】【巴】【斗】【骤】【雨】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【株】【柠】【檬】【茶】【 】【一】【双】【大】【力】【水】【手】【一】【顿】【雪】【糕】【、】【苏】【打】【一】【亩】【阿】【华】【田】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【朵】【雨】【伞】【一】【束】【雪】【花】【 】【一】【瓶】【银】【河】【 】【一】【葫】【芦】【宇】【宙】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【头】【训】【导】【主】【任】【一】【只】【七】【省】【巡】【按】【一】【匹】【将】【军】【一】【尾】【皇】【帝】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【龙】【眼】【吉】【祥】【龙】【须】【糖】【万】【岁】【万】【岁】【万】【万】【岁】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【说】【可】【不】【可】【以】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【自】【然】【远】【不】【止】【文】【章】【所】【列】【。】【其】【所】【选】【四】【题】【,】【有】【一】【个】【共】【同】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【(】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【的】【代】【表】【)】【和】【“】【我】【”】【(】【成】【年】【人】【的】【代】【表】【)】【,】【各】【自】【的】【答】【案】【是】【不】【同】【的】【。】【以】【第】【一】【题】【为】【例】【,】【用】【关】【联】【词】【“】【如】【果】【…】【…】【就】【…】【…】【”】【造】【句】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【答】【案】【是】【“】【如】【果】【有】【人】【打】【我】【一】【拳】【,】【我】【就】【要】【还】【他】【一】【拳】【”】【。】【就】【语】【法】【意】【义】【而】【言】【,】【这】【是】【假】【设】【条】【件】【句】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【这】【样】【造】【句】【是】【不】【错】【的】【。】【然】【而】【,】【对】【这】【样】【的】【“】【答】【案】【”】【,】【“】【老】【师】【”】【并】【不】【认】【同】【(】【“】【被】【老】【师】【打】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【惊】【叹】【号】【”】【)】【,】【作】【为】【哥】【哥】【(】【或】【姐】【姐】【)】【的】【“】【我】【”】【也】【不】【认】【同】【(】【“】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【处】【世】【尚】【浅】【,】【很】【多】【道】【理】【你】【不】【懂】【”】【)】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【不】【服】【,】【根】【据】【“】【天】【平】【”】【两】【边】【对】【等】【的】【原】【理】【加】【以】【“】【反】【驳】【”】【。】【显】【然】【,】【这】【里】【争】【执】【的】【焦】【点】【不】【在】【句】【子】【的】【形】【式】【,】【而】【在】【于】【句】【子】【的】【内】【容】【,】【其】【中】【涉】【及】【处】【世】【为】【人】【的】【“】【道】【理】【”】【。】【那】【么】【,】【争】【执】【双】【方】【究】【竟】【谁】【是】【有】【理】【方】【呢】【?】【说】【起】【来】【双】【方】【都】【振】【振】【有】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【下】【三】【题】【也】【大】【致】【如】【此】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【和】【“】【我】【”】【答】【案】【不】【同】【,】【又】【各】【自】【成】【“】【理】【”】【。】【客】【观】【地】【说】【,】【两】【者】【比】【较】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【答】【案】【比】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【答】【案】【要】【准】【确】【一】【些】【,】【深】【刻】【一】【些】【,】【全】【面】【一】【些】【。】【然】【而】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【不】【足】【”】【是】【出】【乎】【自】【然】【的】【,】【合】【乎】【儿】【童】【年】【龄】【段】【的】【,】【因】【而】【是】【不】【可】【能】【超】【越】【的】【。】【恰】【恰】【是】【这】【些】【“】【不】【足】【”】【闪】【现】【出】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【纯】【真】【、】【率】【直】【和】【勇】【敢】【的】【童】【心】【童】【趣】【。】【而】【成】【人】【的】【“】【成】【熟】【”】【则】【往】【往】【带】【有】【伪】【饰】【、】【世】【故】【和】【功】【利】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【敢】【于】【直】【言】【“】【别】【人】【打】【我】【,】【我】【就】【还】【手】【!】【”】【而】【承】【认】【对】【此】【表】【示】【不】【能】【理】【解】【,】【或】【以】【为】【不】【合】【“】【世】【故】【道】【理】【”】【,】【但】【是】【在】【街】【面】【上】【就】【“】【有】【人】【大】【打】【出】【手】【”】【,】【言】【行】【不】【一】【的】【情】【形】【屡】【有】【发】【生】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【敢】【于】【批】【评】【“】【博】【士】【帽】【不】【好】【看】【,】【还】【不】【如】【我】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【呢】【”】【,】【追】【求】【的】【是】【快】【乐】【的】【直】【觉】【。】【而】【成】【人】【在】【追】【求】【“】【做】【博】【士】【,】【戴】【博】【士】【帽】【”】【的】【时】【候】【,】【却】【难】【掩】【“】【功】【利】【色】【彩】【”】【,】【其】【中】【含】【有】【多】【少】【苦】【涩】【和】【无】【奈】【。】【文】【章】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【疼】【爱】【有】【加】【,】【通】【过】【对】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【四】【道】【题】【的】【演】【绎】【,】【赞】【美】【“】【纯】【洁】【的】【童】【心】【”】【,】【“】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【”】【,】【指】【出】【这】【是】【一】【片】【“】【成】【年】【人】【无】【法】【介】【入】【的】【乐】【土】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【是】【孩】【子】【就】【应】【该】【有】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【。】【法】【国】【教】【育】【家】【卢】【梭】【说】【:】【“】【把】【孩】【子】【看】【做】【孩】【子】【。】【”】【(】【《】【爱】【弥】【儿】【》】【)】【对】【待】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【应】【该】【从】【两】【个】【方】【面】【看】【,】【一】【方】【面】【从】【成】【人】【角】【度】【看】【,】【从】【教】【育】【者】【角】【度】【看】【,】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【(】【或】【“】【姐】【姐】【”】【)】【也】【罢】【,】【老】【师】【也】【罢】【,】【所】【有】【年】【长】【的】【人】【都】【应】【该】【认】【识】【并】【尊】【重】【孩】【子】【的】【天】【性】【,】【遵】【循】【孩】【子】【成】【长】【的】【规】【律】【。】【对】【于】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【,】【既】【不】【能】【拔】【苗】【助】【长】【,】【也】【不】【能】【越】【俎】【代】【庖】【,】【更】【不】【能】【横】【加】【打】【压】【,】【而】【只】【能】【顺】【其】【自】【然】【,】【因】【势】【利】【导】【。】【在】【这】【方】【面】【,】【文】【章】【作】【者】【(】【“】【我】【”】【)】【的】【态】【度】【是】【正】【确】【的】【。】【“】【我】【”】【对】【于】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【据】【理】【力】【争】【,】【“】【反】【驳】【”】【也】【好】【,】【“】【反】【对】【”】【也】【罢】【,】【没】【有】【施】【威】【加】【压】【,】【而】【是】【设】【法】【去】【理】【解】【他】【的】【思】【维】【过】【程】【(】【“】【有】【所】【触】【动】【”】【,】【“】【呆】【望】【着】【他】【”】【,】【“】【不】【禁】【哑】【然】【失】【笑】【”】【)】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【即】【使】【认】【识】【有】【误】【(】【“】【尚】【不】【懂】【得】【措】【词】【之】【美】【”】【)】【,】【也】【能】【看】【到】【他】【率】【直】【的】【一】【面】【(】【“】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【”】【)】【。】【特】【别】【是】【从】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【委】【屈】【”】【中】【,】【“】【我】【”】【能】【自】【省】【言】【辞】【过】【重】【,】【是】【自】【己】【缺】【少】【“】【童】【心】【”】【,】【错】【怪】【了】【他】【。】【“】【我】【”】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【自】【省】【自】【责】【态】【度】【,】【不】【禁】【让】【人】【联】【想】【到】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【散】【文】【名】【篇】【《】【风】【筝】【》】【。】【那】【篇】【文】【章】【说】【的】【也】【是】【一】【个】【哥】【哥】【和】【弟】【弟】【的】【故】【事】【。】【十】【岁】【的】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【喜】【欢】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【,】【偷】【偷】【地】【制】【作】【,】【却】【被】【不】【以】【为】【然】【的】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【粗】【暴】【地】【将】【风】【筝】【翅】【骨】【折】【断】【、】【踏】【扁】【。】【多】【少】【年】【后】【,】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【认】【识】【到】【“】【玩】【具】【是】【儿】【童】【的】【天】【使】【”】【,】【深】【深】【自】【责】【当】【年】【行】【为】【的】【不】【端】【,】【由】【此】【心】【情】【沉】【重】【,】【愧】【疚】【不】【已】【。】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【时】【代】【不】【同】【,】【今】【天】【的】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【所】【表】【现】【的】【宽】【容】【、】【理】【解】【和】【支】【持】【,】【已】【非】【昔】【日】【可】【比】【。】【文】【章】【末】【尾】【一】【句】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【弟】【弟】【”】【,】【你】【说】【可】【以】【不】【可】【以】【呢】【?】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【,】【关】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【溢】【于】【言】【表】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【对】【待】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【,】【自】【然】【还】【有】【另】【外】【一】【面】【,】【即】【孩】【子】【如】【何】【对】【待】【自】【身】【。】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【正】【处】【于】【成】【长】【期】【,】【从】【幼】【稚】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【是】【人】【生】【必】【经】【阶】【段】【。】【在】【这】【一】【时】【期】【,】【有】【两】【点】【是】【需】【要】【注】【意】【的】【,】【一】【是】【独】【立】【性】【,】【一】【是】【可】【接】【受】【性】【。】【从】【独】【立】【性】【说】【,】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【要】【敢】【于】【发】【表】【意】【见】【,】【坦】【诚】【、】【率】【直】【。】【从】【可】【接】【受】【性】【说】【,】【又】【要】【知】【道】【受】【知】【识】【局】【限】【,】【阅】【历】【局】【限】【,】【或】【有】【不】【周】【全】【之】【处】【,】【甚】【至】【失】【误】【。】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【要】【善】【于】【听】【取】【批】【评】【和】【指】【导】【,】【以】【求】【取】【得】【进】【步】【和】【完】【善】【,】【这】【其】【中】【最】【关】【键】【的】【是】【遇】【事】【讲】【“】【理】【”】【。】【在】【文】【章】【中】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【表】【现】【是】【可】【圈】【可】【点】【的】【。】【在】【完】【成】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【的】【答】【案】【时】【,】【他】【循】【理】【而】【为】【,】【据】【理】【力】【争】【,】【绝】【不】【无】【理】【取】【闹】【。】【有】【了】【这】【个】【“】【理】【”】【字】【,】【就】【将】【“】【独】【立】【”】【和】【“】【偏】【执】【”】【,】【“】【骄】【纵】【”】【和】【“】【谦】【让】【”】【,】【“】【自】【私】【”】【和】【“】【利】【他】【”】【,】【“】【放】【任】【”】【和】【“】【规】【范】【”】【,】【“】【极】【端】【”】【和】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【等】【等】【区】【别】【开】【来】【,】【或】【有】【失】【误】【,】【也】【能】【纠】【正】【。】【对】【于】【当】【下】【青】【少】【年】【中】【普】【遍】【存】【在】【的】【“】【独】【生】【子】【女】【”】【综】【合】【征】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【表】【现】【可】【谓】【对】【“】【症】【”】【下】【药】【。】【你】【看】【,】【在】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【受】【到】【批】【评】【时】【,】【尽】【管】【“】【委】【屈】【”】【(】【事】【实】【证】【明】【,】【他】【没】【有】【错】【)】【,】【也】【能】【容】【忍】【(】【“】【弟】【弟】【什】【么】【也】【不】【说】【”】【)】【,】【期】【待】【正】【确】【的】【结】【论】【。】【这】【正】【是】【儿】【童】【“】【理】【”】【性】【的】【可】【贵】【表】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【》】【一】【文】【立】【意】【高】【远】【,】【且】【有】【现】【实】【教】【育】【意】【义】【,】【已】【如】【上】【述】【。】【选】【材】【精】【当】【,】【新】【鲜】【活】【泼】【也】【是】【特】【色】【。】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【在】【不】【计】【其】【数】【中】【仅】【是】【四】【题】【,】【全】【是】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【成】【长】【的】【话】【题】【,】【“】【以】【少】【少】【件】【胜】【多】【多】【件】【”】【(】【郑】【板】【桥】【语】【)】【,】【充】【分】【表】【现】【了】【它】【选】【材】【的】【典】【型】【价】【值】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【段】【引】【用】【香】【港】【作】【家】【西】【西】【的】【一】【首】【诗】【《】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【》】【,】【说】【的】【也】【是】【量】【词】【运】【用】【,】【与】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【中】【的】【“】【量】【词】【训】【练】【”】【无】【缝】【对】【接】【,】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【。】【这】【首】【诗】【是】【儿】【童】【文】【学】【精】【品】【。】【诗】【中】【妙】【语】【连】【篇】【:】【“】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【头】【训】【导】【主】【任】【一】【只】【七】【省】【巡】【按】【一】【匹】【将】【军】【一】【尾】【皇】【帝】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【龙】【眼】【吉】【祥】【龙】【须】【糖】【万】【岁】【万】【岁】【万】【万】【岁】【?】【”】【尽】【显】【童】【趣】【,】【令】【人】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【。】【引】【在】【此】【处】【,】【不】【仅】【有】【力】【地】【呼】【应】【了】【文】【章】【作】【者】【的】【观】【点】【,】【还】【开】【拓】【了】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【视】【野】【,】【行】【文】【的】【同】【时】【,】【为】【读】【者】【贡】【献】【了】【一】【份】【精】【美】【的】【精】【神】【食】【粮】【。】【文】【章】【作】【者】【年】【仅】【1】【4】【岁】【,】【下】【笔】【从】【容】【,】【见】【识】【非】【凡】【,】【能】【有】【此】【阅】【读】【与】【写】【作】【的】【功】【力】【,】【实】【为】【难】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【p】【>】【她】【虽】【然】【凶】【,】【但】【她】【的】【善】【良】【常】【常】【让】【人】【温】【暖】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】感冒发烧【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【回】【放】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【…】【…】【”】【为】【标】【题】【,】【联】【系】【生】【活】【体】【验】【与】【认】【识】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【自】【定】【文】【体】【,】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【(】【含】【标】【点】【符】【号】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【解】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【道】【命】【题】【作】【文】【看】【似】【很】【容】【易】【写】【,】【但】【是】【要】【写】【出】【彩】【实】【属】【不】【易】【,】【因】【为】【容】【易】【落】【入】【俗】【套】【。】【要】【想】【写】【出】【新】【意】【应】【注】【意】【以】【下】【几】【点】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【力】【避】【平】【淡】【放】【眼】【高】【远】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【不】【少】【同】【学】【会】【写】【自】【己】【在】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【和】【朋】【友】【之】【间】【发】【生】【的】【故】【事】【,】【诸】【如】【互】【相】【帮】【助】【,】【互】【相】【激】【励】【,】【或】【闹】【矛】【盾】【后】【重】【归】【于】【好】【;】【也】【会】【写】【自】【己】【和】【弟】【弟】【、】【哥】【哥】【、】【妈】【妈】【、】【外】【婆】【、】【外】【公】【、】【爷】【爷】【、】【奶】【奶】【发】【生】【的】【故】【事】【;】【还】【会】【写】【自】【己】【在】【雨】【天】【做】【什】【么】【事】【情】【,】【诸】【如】【某】【次】【考】【试】【失】【败】【心】【里】【失】【落】【,】【或】【写】【遇】【到】【不】【顺】【心】【的】【事】【情】【,】【或】【写】【如】【何】【在】【春】【天】【上】【学】【、】【回】【家】【的】【,】【或】【写】【陈】【词】【滥】【调】【式】【的】【帮】【助】【老】【人】【、】【盲】【人】【、】【小】【孩】【过】【马】【路】【等】【。】【选】【择】【这】【些】【素】【材】【会】【很】【容】【易】【撞】【车】【,】【提】【炼】【不】【出】【什】【么】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【。】【不】【妨】【放】【眼】【社】【会】【,】【立】【意】【上】【追】【求】【更】【高】【的】【精】【神】【、】【价】【值】【、】【情】【感】【。】【把】【现】【实】【生】【活】【融】【入】【到】【作】【文】【中】【,】【尽】【量】【用】【大】【的】【眼】【光】【去】【看】【社】【会】【生】【活】【,】【用】【世】【界】【的】【、】【长】【远】【的】【、】【人】【生】【的】【目】【光】【去】【审】【视】【生】【活】【、】【生】【命】【和】【人】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【见】【微】【知】【著】【眼】【光】【独】【到】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【文】【题】【立】【意】【时】【要】【想】【到】【选】【材】【处】【处】【是】【“】【小】【”】【,】【眼】【中】【时】【时】【是】【“】【大】【”】【。】【通】【过】【一】【些】【日】【常】【凡】【人】【小】【事】【,】【能】【让】【人】【领】【略】【生】【活】【的】【况】【味】【,】【能】【小】【中】【见】【大】【。】【即】【要】【从】【本】【质】【上】【把】【握】【住】【“】【小】【事】【”】【与】【整】【个】【时】【代】【、】【社】【会】【和】【生】【活】【的】【内】【在】【联】【系】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【在】【构】【思】【中】【要】【审】【度】【小】【处】【,】【着】【眼】【大】【处】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【…】【…】【”】【这】【个】【文】【题】【,】【我】【们】【不】【妨】【想】【一】【想】【弱】【势】【群】【体】【在】【做】【什】【么】【:】【一】【个】【下】【岗】【工】【人】【为】【了】【给】【女】【儿】【攒】【学】【费】【,】【在】【春】【天】【里】【去】【卖】【饼】【、】【苹】【果】【等】【等】【,】【考】【问】【我】【们】【这】【个】【社】【会】【的】【上】【学】【难】【问】【题】【;】【一】【家】【几】【口】【挤】【在】【破】【旧】【的】【平】【房】【内】【,】【何】【人】【来】【关】【心】【他】【们】【?】【被】【城】【市】【边】【缘】【化】【的】【农】【民】【工】【在】【春】【天】【做】【什】【么】【?】【打】【牌】【?】【赌】【博】【?】【想】【家】【?】【何】【人】【来】【关】【心】【他】【们】【的】【业】【余】【生】【活】【?】【等】【等】【,】【关】【键】【是】【写】【出】【自】【己】【的】【感】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【环】【境】【描】【写】【简】【洁】【有】【用】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【…】【…】【”】【给】【我】【们】【提】【供】【了】【一】【个】【发】【生】【故】【事】【的】【背】【景】【和】【活】【动】【场】【景】【,】【即】【“】【春】【天】【”】【,】【所】【以】【环】【境】【描】【写】【必】【不】【可】【少】【。】【如】【何】【处】【理】【好】【环】【境】【描】【写】【和】【事】【情】【发】【展】【之】【间】【的】【关】【系】【就】【显】【得】【尤】【为】【重】【要】【。】【如】【果】【环】【境】【描】【写】【能】【起】【到】【衬】【托】【人】【物】【心】【情】【、】【推】【动】【情】【节】【发】【展】【的】【作】【用】【就】【会】【锦】【上】【添】【花】【。】【当】【然】【不】【能】【为】【了】【写】【景】【而】【写】【景】【,】【主】【体】【部】【分】【不】【是】【春】【天】【,】【而】【是】【发】【生】【在】【春】【天】【的】【故】【事】【,】【给】【自】【己】【带】【来】【的】【影】【响】【或】【教】【育】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【真】【情】【实】【感】【张】【扬】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【“】【文】【以】【情】【动】【人】【,】【书】【以】【文】【抒】【情】【”】【,】【作】【文】【要】【补】【充】【的】【本】【身】【就】【是】【自】【己】【在】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【春】【天】【的】【独】【特】【感】【受】【,】【“】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【”】【这】【一】【时】【间】【实】【质】【上】【是】【指】【“】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【怎】【么】【样】【或】【发】【生】【了】【什】【么】【事】【”】【,】【是】【后】【面】【感】【受】【的】【原】【因】【所】【在】【。】【后】【面】【的】【感】【受】【要】【建】【立】【在】【真】【实】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【不】【能】【抒】【空】【洞】【之】【情】【。】【今】【年】【的】【茂】【名】【中】【考】【作】【文】【大】【家】【都】【有】【话】【可】【写】【,】【但】【要】【写】【好】【也】【不】【是】【很】【容】【易】【的】【事】【情】【,】【考】【生】【要】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【感】【悟】【和】【平】【时】【的】【写】【作】【风】【格】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【的】【个】【性】【,】【展】【示】【出】【自】【己】【的】【风】【采】【。】【而】【对】【于】【明】【年】【中】【考】【的】【考】【生】【来】【说】【,】【一】【定】【要】【多】【品】【悟】【生】【活】【,】【多】【对】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【些】【事】【情】【进】【行】【理】【性】【的】【、】【冷】【静】【的】【思】【考】【,】【多】【训】【练】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【在】【记】【叙】【、】【描】【写】【、】【议】【论】【、】【抒】【情】【等】【表】【现】【手】【法】【的】【训】【练】【上】【多】【下】【工】【夫】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【的】【下】【定】【了】【决】【心】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【茂】【名】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【雨】【绵】【绵】【,】【万】【物】【复】【苏】【,】【大】【地】【披】【上】【一】【层】【嫩】【绿】【。】【我】【喜】【欢】【春】【天】【,】【喜】【欢】【它】【的】【美】【丽】【,】【喜】【欢】【它】【的】【纯】【洁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【踏】【在】【雨】【水】【滋】【润】【过】【的】【草】【地】【上】【,】【顿】【时】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【,】【春】【天】【的】【勃】【勃】【生】【机】【让】【我】【下】【定】【了】【决】【心】【,】【我】【决】【心】【坚】【定】【不】【移】【地】【去】【寻】【觅】【你】【。】【一】【个】【能】【够】【承】【载】【我】【的】【梦】【想】【,】【能】【够】【赐】【予】【我】【翅】【膀】【的】【你】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【要】【寻】【找】【一】【个】【怎】【样】【的】【你】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【告】【诉】【自】【己】【,】【一】【个】【勇】【敢】【的】【你】【。】【成】【长】【的】【路】【满】【是】【艰】【难】【险】【阻】【,】【有】【点】【胆】【怯】【的】【我】【时】【常】【会】【想】【着】【退】【缩】【,】【用】【放】【弃】【来】【成】【全】【自】【己】【。】【而】【坚】【强】【的】【你】【会】【坦】【然】【接】【受】【挑】【战】【,】【相】【信】【黄】【昏】【之】【后】【总】【会】【有】【黎】【明】【,】【在】【追】【逐】【梦】【想】【的】【路】【上】【,】【你】【总】【是】【大】【胆】【地】【往】【前】【闯】【,】【因】【为】【你】【说】【,】【只】【有】【坎】【坷】【泥】【泞】【的】【道】【路】【方】【能】【磨】【炼】【出】【坚】【强】【的】【意】【志】【。】【我】【开】【始】【懂】【得】【,】【我】【需】【要】【像】【你】【一】【样】【勇】【敢】【,】【一】【样】【全】【力】【以】【赴】【追】【逐】【自】【己】【的】【梦】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【要】【寻】【找】【一】【个】【怎】【样】【的】【你】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【告】【诉】【自】【己】【,】【一】【个】【刻】【苦】【的】【你】【。】【四】【月】【的】【凤】【凰】【花】【结】【满】【了】【枝】【芽】【,】【火】【红】【的】【叶】【片】【点】【缀】【着】【菁】【菁】【校】【园】【,】【我】【们】【即】【将】【奔】【向】【中】【考】【,】【那】【令】【人】【憧】【憬】【又】【心】【酸】【的】【年】【华】【。】【当】【我】【看】【到】【昔】【日】【的】【师】【兄】【师】【姐】【们】【在】【三】【点】【一】【线】【的】【生】【活】【里】【忙】【碌】【,】【默】【默】【无】【闻】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【的】【心】【在】【微】【微】【打】【战】【。】【你】【拍】【着】【我】【肩】【膀】【说】【:】【“】【难】【道】【付】【出】【与】【收】【获】【不】【是】【成】【正】【比】【例】【的】【吗】【?】【你】【想】【踏】【进】【梦】【想】【中】【的】【象】【牙】【塔】【,】【就】【得】【刻】【苦】【用】【功】【。】【你】【首】【先】【给】【自】【己】【定】【个】【考】【试】【目】【标】【,】【然】【后】【是】【学】【习】【计】【划】【。】【课】【桌】【上】【堆】【积】【的】【任】【何】【一】【本】【练】【习】【册】【都】【不】【轻】【易】【放】【过】【,】【课】【本】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【地】【翻】【阅】【,】【直】【到】【自】【己】【熟】【透】【为】【止】【。】【”】【你】【说】【,】【“】【风】【雨】【兼】【程】【的】【日】【子】【里】【,】【要】【有】【鹰】【击】【长】【空】【的】【胆】【量】【。】【”】【我】【渐】【渐】【懂】【得】【,】【我】【需】【要】【像】【你】【一】【样】【刻】【苦】【,】【一】【样】【坚】【定】【不】【移】【地】【用】【汗】【水】【浇】【灌】【希】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【要】【寻】【找】【一】【个】【怎】【样】【的】【你】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【告】【诉】【自】【己】【,】【一】【个】【坚】【强】【的】【你】【。】【木】【棉】【花】【又】【开】【了】【,】【飘】【在】【无】【垠】【的】【天】【空】【,】【我】【一】【直】【在】【怀】【念】【我】【们】【的】【那】【些】【美】【好】【的】【过】【去】【,】【看】【到】【木】【棉】【花】【想】【起】【了】【我】【们】【的】【那】【些】【誓】【言】【,】【分】【离】【两】【地】【还】【是】【让】【我】【久】【久】【不】【能】【平】【静】【。】【你】【说】【,】【友】【谊】【就】【是】【一】【个】【如】【此】【奇】【妙】【的】【东】【西】【,】【天】【下】【没】【有】【不】【散】【的】【宴】【席】【,】【既】【然】【各】【居】【一】【方】【,】【那】【就】【应】【更】【加】【珍】【惜】【对】【方】【,】【把】【自】【己】【每】【天】【对】【她】【的】【想】【念】【写】【成】【日】【记】【。】【我】【渐】【渐】【懂】【得】【,】【我】【需】【要】【像】【你】【一】【样】【坚】【强】【,】【一】【样】【恪】【守】【着】【淡】【淡】【的】【、】【纯】【纯】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【的】【下】【定】【了】【决】【心】【,】【决】【心】【去】【寻】【找】【你】【,】【寻】【找】【勇】【敢】【的】【你】【,】【寻】【找】【刻】【苦】【的】【你】【,】【寻】【找】【坚】【强】【的】【你】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【个】【你】【,】【我】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【的】【一】【个】【缩】【影】【,】【我】【即】【将】【成】【为】【你】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【从】【明】【天】【起】【,】【做】【一】【个】【幸】【福】【的】【人】【/】【喂】【马】【、】【劈】【柴】【、】【周】【游】【世】【界】【/】【从】【明】【天】【起】【,】【关】【心】【粮】【食】【和】【蔬】【菜】【/】【我】【有】【一】【所】【房】【子】【,】【面】【朝】【大】【海】【,】【春】【暖】【花】【开】【。】【”】【这】【是】【海】【子】【的】【人】【生】【追】【求】【。】【当】【今】【中】【学】【生】【到】【底】【要】【做】【一】【个】【怎】【样】【的】【人】【呢】【?】【该】【考】【生】【给】【我】【们】【做】【出】【了】【一】【个】【最】【佳】【答】【案】【:】【做】【一】【个】【勇】【敢】【、】【刻】【苦】【、】【坚】【强】【的】【人】【,】【我】【们】【的】【明】【天】【才】【能】【更】【加】【美】【好】【灿】【烂】【。】【清】【晰】【的】【结】【构】【形】【式】【。】【文】【章】【主】【体】【的】【三】【个】【部】【分】【都】【以】【“】【我】【要】【寻】【找】【一】【个】【怎】【样】【的】【你】【呢】【?】【我】【告】【诉】【自】【己】【,】【一】【个】【…】【…】【的】【你】【”】【来】【引】【出】【下】【文】【,】【然】【后】【分】【别】【从】【勇】【敢】【、】【刻】【苦】【、】【坚】【强】【三】【个】【方】【面】【去】【展】【开】【叙】【说】【。】【如】【此】【排】【比】【段】【的】【结】【构】【形】【式】【,】【给】【人】【一】【种】【层】【次】【十】【分】【清】【晰】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【精】【妙】【的】【构】【思】【技】【巧】【:】【寻】【找】【一】【个】【人】【,】【一】【个】【勇】【敢】【的】【人】【、】【一】【个】【刻】【苦】【的】【人】【、】【一】【个】【坚】【强】【的】【人】【,】【那】【么】【这】【个】【人】【在】【哪】【里】【呢】【?】【在】【作】【者】【的】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【。】【如】【此】【构】【思】【,】【实】【在】【高】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【累】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【茂】【名】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【之】【所】【以】【感】【到】【累】【,】【特】【别】【是】【心】【累】【,】【是】【因】【为】【总】【徘】【徊】【在】【坚】【持】【与】【放】【弃】【之】【间】【,】【迟】【迟】【没】【有】【做】【出】【一】【个】【抉】【择】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【课】【铃】【又】【响】【了】【,】【回】【到】【教】【室】【的】【座】【位】【上】【,】【面】【对】【桌】【面】【上】【垒】【起】【高】【高】【的】【一】【摞】【书】【,】【我】【真】【累】【。】【每】【天】【漫】【无】【目】【的】【地】【学】【习】【、】【吃】【饭】【、】【睡】【觉】【,】【起】【床】【再】【接】【着】【学】【习】【、】【吃】【饭】【、】【睡】【觉】【,】【天】【天】【如】【此】【,】【兜】【了】【一】【圈】【又】【一】【圈】【,】【真】【累】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【底】【是】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【怎】【么】【会】【如】【此】【之】【累】【,】【像】【是】【身】【体】【的】【全】【部】【精】【力】【都】【被】【魔】【鬼】【吸】【走】【了】【一】【样】【,】【整】【日】【无】【精】【打】【采】【,】【说】【是】【行】【尸】【走】【肉】【,】【我】【想】【也】【不】【为】【过】【。】【可】【是】【身】【体】【里】【的】【那】【个】【小】【精】【灵】【,】【它】【拼】【命】【地】【挣】【扎】【着】【、】【反】【抗】【着】【,】【我】【能】【听】【见】【它】【的】【呼】【声】【:】【“】【我】【不】【允】【许】【你】【堕】【落】【,】【不】【允】【许】【你】【失】【去】【动】【力】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【啊】【,】【原】【本】【那】【个】【浑】【身】【充】【满】【斗】【志】【,】【拥】【有】【美】【好】【梦】【想】【的】【我】【哪】【去】【了】【,】【是】【什】【么】【拖】【住】【了】【我】【梦】【想】【的】【脚】【步】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【是】【累】【,】【是】【心】【累】【。】【而】【人】【之】【所】【以】【心】【累】【,】【是】【因】【为】【总】【徘】【徊】【在】【坚】【持】【与】【放】【弃】【之】【间】【。】【家】【庭】【对】【我】【寄】【予】【的】【期】【望】【,】【让】【我】【想】【坚】【持】【,】【面】【对】【厚】【厚】【的】【永】【远】【读】【不】【完】【的】【书】【,】【我】【想】【放】【弃】【;】【朋】【友】【和】【同】【学】【的】【鼓】【励】【,】【让】【我】【想】【坚】【持】【,】【面】【对】【一】【道】【道】【解】【不】【完】【的】【难】【题】【,】【我】【想】【放】【弃】【;】【想】【起】【那】【曾】【经】【为】【自】【己】【精】【心】【编】【织】【的】【美】【好】【梦】【想】【,】【我】【想】【坚】【持】【,】【但】【面】【对】【外】【界】【形】【形】【色】【色】【的】【诱】【惑】【,】【我】【想】【放】【弃】【。】【心】【里】【的】【魔】【鬼】【与】【小】【精】【灵】【一】【直】【在】【斗】【争】【,】【我】【夹】【在】【中】【间】【,】【着】【实】【感】【到】【累】【,】【真】【累】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【一】【边】【犯】【着】【春】【困】【,】【一】【边】【啃】【书】【,】【可】【是】【不】【知】【道】【什】【么】【时】【候】【,】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【进】【入】【了】【梦】【乡】【。】【梦】【里】【,】【我】【看】【见】【了】【很】【多】【年】【后】【的】【自】【己】【,】【干】【练】【的】【短】【发】【、】【整】【洁】【的】【套】【装】【,】【正】【从】【容】【不】【迫】【地】【和】【客】【户】【谈】【论】【我】【的】【经】【济】【学】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【桌】【敲】【敲】【桌】【子】【:】【“】【喂】【,】【老】【师】【下】【来】【了】【。】【”】【一】【句】【话】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【里】【拉】【回】【了】【现】【实】【。】【可】【是】【回】【想】【起】【那】【个】【梦】【,】【突】【然】【让】【我】【精】【神】【抖】【擞】【,】【那】【不】【就】【是】【我】【想】【要】【的】【未】【来】【吗】【?】【如】【梦】【初】【醒】【。】【为】【了】【最】【初】【的】【梦】【想】【,】【我】【要】【坚】【持】【,】【无】【论】【如】【何】【都】【要】【到】【达】【梦】【想】【的】【彼】【岸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【真】【累】【,】【但】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【的】【夏】【天】【,】【我】【应】【该】【重】【振】【旗】【鼓】【,】【高】【扬】【梦】【想】【的】【风】【帆】【。】【我】【的】【美】【好】【未】【来】【正】【向】【我】【招】【手】【呢】【!】【彼】【岸】【是】【我】【坚】【持】【的】【方】【向】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【倾】【听】【过】【花】【儿】【静】【静】【地】【开】【放】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【倾】【听】【过】【蝉】【儿】【声】【声】【悲】【切】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【看】【到】【过】【秋】【天】【落】【叶】【飘】【零】【的】【沉】【沉】【渲】【染】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【懂】【冬】【天】【雪】【压】【青】【松】【的】【挺】【挺】【高】【洁】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【没】【有】【,】【请】【你】【静】【下】【心】【来】【,】【让】【我】【们】【一】【起】【去】【凝】【听】【大】【自】【然】【的】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【天】【来】【了】【,】【眼】【前】【全】【是】【让】【人】【心】【醉】【的】【绿】【。】【在】【这】【片】【碧】【绿】【的】【海】【洋】【里】【,】【我】【们】【倾】【听】【大】【自】【然】【的】【心】【跳】【。】【鸟】【儿】【欢】【快】【地】【鸣】【叫】【,】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【,】【生】【活】【是】【甜】【美】【的】【。】【早】【晨】【,】【我】【们】【一】【醒】【来】【,】【就】【能】【体】【会】【到】【花】【开】【的】【声】【音】【,】【就】【能】【感】【受】【这】【一】【天】【会】【充】【满】【蓬】【勃】【的】【活】【力】【,】【心】【里】【有】【着】【说】【不】【出】【的】【快】【乐】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夏】【天】【的】【傍】【晚】【,】【坐】【在】【廊】【檐】【下】【,】【倾】【听】【淅】【沥】【的】【雨】【打】【芭】【蕉】【声】【。】【那】【雨】【点】【敲】【打】【地】【面】【,】【轻】【鼓】【门】【扉】【,】【就】【像】【是】【在】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【:】【不】【要】【着】【急】【,】【风】【雨】【过】【后】【会】【有】【彩】【虹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【树】【上】【,】【蝉】【儿】【无】【奈】【地】【悲】【鸣】【,】【一】【声】【声】【的】【叹】【息】【,】【聒】【噪】【着】【夏】【日】【带】【来】【的】【郁】【闷】【。】【那】【是】【在】【掷】【地】【有】【声】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【:】【只】【有】【经】【历】【这】【些】【炎】【热】【的】【炙】【烤】【,】【我】【们】【才】【会】【迎】【来】【一】【个】【宜】【人】【的】【秋】【天】【。】【“】【居】【高】【声】【自】【远】【,】【非】【是】【借】【秋】【风】【”】【,】【是】【对】【蝉】【的】【赞】【美】【,】【不】【也】【是】【对】【我】【们】【的】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【天】【到】【了】【,】【那】【落】【叶】【又】【在】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【:】【生】【活】【需】【要】【一】【种】【奉】【献】【精】【神】【,】【一】【种】【感】【恩】【精】【神】【。】【阵】【阵】【秋】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【树】【上】【的】【枯】【叶】【纷】【纷】【垂】【落】【,】【像】【一】【群】【孩】【子】【在】【追】【赶】【、】【嬉】【戏】【,】【每】【一】【片】【落】【叶】【都】【怀】【着】【归】【根】【的】【情】【结】【。】【它】【们】【知】【道】【,】【是】【经】【过】【母】【体】【的】【养】【育】【,】【才】【会】【有】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【生】【命】【。】【“】【落】【红】【不】【是】【无】【情】【物】【,】【化】【作】【春】【泥】【更】【护】【花】【。】【”】【落】【叶】【也】【知】【感】【恩】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【倾】【听】【那】【果】【儿】【在】【枝】【头】【害】【羞】【的】【吟】【笑】【,】【它】【好】【像】【在】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【,】【它】【们】【已】【经】【成】【熟】【了】【,】【可】【以】【用】【果】【实】【来】【回】【报】【风】【、】【雨】【、】【光】【、】【热】【。】【因】【为】【它】【们】【知】【道】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【风】【,】【它】【们】【怕】【早】【已】【霉】【烂】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【雨】【,】【它】【们】【早】【就】【干】【瘪】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【阳】【光】【,】【它】【们】【不】【会】【成】【熟】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【热】【,】【它】【们】【早】【已】【苍】【老】【…】【…】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【心】【里】【多】【了】【一】【份】【感】【恩】【的】【思】【绪】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【北】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【冬】【天】【来】【了】【。】【听】【那】【雪】【花】【沙】【沙】【的】【声】【音】【,】【它】【好】【像】【在】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【:】【要】【经】【得】【住】【严】【冬】【的】【考】【验】【。】【听】【那】【松】【柏】【深】【沉】【而】【悲】【怆】【的】【声】【音】【,】【它】【好】【像】【在】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【们】【:】【“】【宝】【剑】【锋】【从】【磨】【砺】【出】【,】【梅】【花】【香】【自】【苦】【寒】【来】【。】【”】【“】【岁】【寒】【,】【然】【后】【知】【松】【柏】【之】【后】【凋】【也】【!】【”】【坚】【强】【与】【不】【屈】【,】【就】【是】【在】【雪】【压】【青】【松】【的】【时】【候】【磨】【炼】【出】【来】【的】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【心】【里】【有】【了】【坚】【忍】【的】【品】【质】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【的】【声】【音】【是】【很】【微】【妙】【的】【,】【也】【是】【富】【有】【哲】【理】【的】【。】【让】【我】【们】【一】【起】【去】【倾】【听】【大】【自】【然】【的】【悄】【悄】【提】【醒】【吧】【!】【因】【为】【,】【大】【自】【然】【是】【永】【不】【甘】【寂】【寞】【的】【。】【于】【是】【,】【有】【了】【彩】【蝶】【飞】【舞】【,】【鹰】【击】【长】【空】【,】【鱼】【翔】【浅】【底】【的】【美】【丽】【;】【有】【了】【雨】【后】【一】【道】【道】【彩】【虹】【的】【缤】【纷】【;】【有】【了】【崖】【壁】【上】【的】【一】【棵】【棵】【青】【松】【的】【刚】【毅】【…】【…】【这】【就】【是】【大】【自】【然】【的】【独】【具】【匠】【心】【的】【提】【醒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【听】【,】【大】【自】【然】【又】【在】【用】【潺】【潺】【如】【溪】【般】【的】【声】【音】【,】【向】【我】【们】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【着】【空】【谷】【的】【幽】【静】【;】【又】【在】【用】【轻】【柔】【得】【让】【人】【心】【醉】【的】【落】【叶】【声】【,】【向】【我】【们】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【着】【原】【始】【森】【林】【的】【古】【老】【与】【神】【秘】【;】【又】【在】【用】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【的】【瀑】【布】【声】【,】【向】【我】【们】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【着】【崇】【山】【的】【秀】【丽】【与】【挺】【拔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【排】【比】【造】【势】【,】【总】【括】【提】【醒】【。】【文】【章】【开】【头】【独】【句】【成】【段】【,】【构】【成】【排】【比】【,】【先】【声】【引】【人】【,】【气】【势】【恢】【弘】【。】【主】【体】【以】【并】【列】【的】【结】【构】【,】【从】【不】【同】【侧】【面】【写】【出】【大】【自】【然】【别】【具】【匠】【心】【的】【悄】【悄】【的】【提】【醒】【,】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【构】【思】【完】【整】【。】【行】【文】【中】【大】【量】【使】【用】【比】【喻】【,】【间】【或】【使】【用】【引】【用】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【很】【有】【文】【学】【底】【蕴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【独】【特】【角】【度】【,】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【。】【文】【章】【主】【题】【以】【四】【季】【为】【序】【,】【从】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【四】【个】【角】【度】【,】【通】【过】【春】【天】【的】【活】【力】【、】【夏】【季】【的】【考】【验】【、】【秋】【天】【的】【奉】【献】【、】【冬】【天】【的】【不】【屈】【,】【写】【出】【大】【自】【然】【乐】【观】【、】【奉】【献】【、】【感】【恩】【、】【坚】【强】【等】【四】【个】【方】【面】【的】【悄】【悄】【地】【提】【醒】【。】【体】【验】【深】【刻】【,】【富】【有】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【侯】【守】【斌】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】感冒发烧【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【饶】【有】【情】【趣】【的】【作】【文】【。】【文】【章】【围】【绕】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【展】【开】【。】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【共】【有】【四】【道】【题】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【都】【做】【了】【答】【案】【。】【只】【是】【“】【我】【”】【(】【哥】【哥】【或】【姐】【姐】【)】【对】【这】【些】【答】【案】【并】【不】【满】【意】【,】【有】【的】【则】【不】【同】【意】【,】【也】【有】【不】【理】【解】【的】【。】【借】【助】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【又】【把】【这】【些】【题】【目】【和】【答】【案】【呈】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【,】【让】【那】【些】【做】【老】【师】【的】【,】【做】【父】【母】【的】【,】【包】【括】【所】【有】【做】【长】【辈】【的】【,】【都】【受】【到】【考】【问】【。】【对】【于】【同】【样】【的】【问】【题】【,】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【同】【成】【年】【人】【往】【往】【有】【不】【同】【的】【答】【案】【,】【是】【是】【非】【非】【,】【孰】【对】【孰】【错】【,】【值】【得】【每】【个】【人】【深】【入】【思】【考】【,】【并】【从】【中】【受】【到】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【且】【看】【文】【章】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【 】【天】【津】【树】【人】【中】【学】【 】【任】【翀】【怡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【在】【作】【业】【本】【里】【写】【道】【:】【“】【如】【果】【有】【人】【打】【我】【一】【拳】【,】【我】【就】【要】【还】【他】【一】【拳】【。】【”】【这】【是】【弟】【弟】【用】【“】【如】【果】【…】【…】【就】【…】【…】【”】【造】【的】【一】【句】【话】【,】【被】【老】【师】【打】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【惊】【叹】【号】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【拿】【起】【作】【业】【本】【,】【望】【着】【字】【迹】【工】【整】【的】【造】【句】【说】【:】【“】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【处】【世】【尚】【浅】【,】【很】【多】【道】【理】【你】【不】【懂】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【却】【托】【起】【下】【巴】【反】【驳】【我】【:】【“】【我】【怎】【么】【不】【懂】【。】【学】【校】【里】【做】【过】【天】【平】【实】【验】【,】【右】【边】【添】【上】【几】【个】【砝】【码】【,】【左】【边】【也】【得】【添】【上】【几】【个】【砝】【码】【。】【别】【人】【打】【我】【,】【我】【就】【还】【手】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【时】【无】【言】【以】【对】【,】【因】【为】【我】【感】【到】【有】【所】【触】【动】【,】【以】【至】【于】【不】【想】【把】【那】【些】【世】【故】【的】【道】【理】【灌】【进】【这】【颗】【纯】【洁】【的】【童】【心】【,】【只】【能】【呆】【望】【着】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【以】【后】【,】【每】【当】【我】【看】【到】【街】【上】【有】【人】【大】【打】【出】【手】【,】【我】【就】【会】【想】【起】【弟】【弟】【的】【造】【句】【,】【不】【禁】【哑】【然】【失】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【“】【组】【词】【造】【句】【”】【里】【有】【这】【样】【一】【道】【题】【—】【—】【写】【一】【句】【话】【,】【其】【中】【必】【须】【提】【到】【窗】【。】【我】【指】【导】【他】【说】【:】【“】【眼】【睛】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【立】【刻】【反】【对】【:】【“】【眼】【睛】【怎】【么】【能】【是】【心】【灵】【的】【窗】【户】【,】【心】【里】【有】【话】【,】【眼】【睛】【能】【表】【达】【吗】【?】【我】【觉】【得】【嘴】【巴】【才】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【,】【心】【里】【有】【话】【就】【能】【讲】【出】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【哑】【口】【无】【言】【了】【。】【弟】【弟】【写】【道】【:】【“】【嘴】【巴】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【太】【小】【,】【尚】【不】【懂】【得】【措】【词】【之】【美】【,】【但】【他】【却】【能】【用】【嘴】【巴】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【学】【校】【让】【每】【个】【学】【生】【都】【谈】【各】【自】【的】【理】【想】【。】【弟】【弟】【为】【这】【犯】【了】【愁】【,】【跑】【来】【问】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【长】【大】【后】【,】【你】【想】【不】【想】【当】【科】【学】【家】【、】【文】【学】【家】【、】【艺】【术】【家】【或】【者】【做】【博】【士】【,】【戴】【博】【士】【帽】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【坚】【决】【地】【回】【答】【:】【“】【不】【想】【,】【博】【士】【帽】【不】【好】【看】【,】【还】【不】【如】【我】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【发】【觉】【问】【下】【去】【也】【没】【什】【么】【意】【思】【,】【难】【道】【在】【孩】【子】【们】【心】【中】【,】【代】【表】【学】【识】【的】【博】【士】【帽】【真】【就】【不】【如】【一】【顶】【普】【通】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【?】【难】【怪】【很】【多】【成】【年】【人】【喜】【欢】【回】【忆】【童】【年】【,】【回】【忆】【那】【段】【没】【有】【任】【何】【功】【利】【色】【彩】【的】【岁】【月】【,】【那】【片】【成】【年】【人】【无】【法】【介】【入】【的】【乐】【土】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【,】【弟】【弟】【只】【想】【做】【个】【快】【乐】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【或】【者】【,】【弟】【弟】【更】【想】【做】【个】【能】【让】【别】【人】【快】【乐】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【匆】【忙】【跑】【到】【我】【跟】【前】【,】【让】【我】【帮】【他】【检】【查】【作】【业】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【是】【组】【量】【词】【训】【练】【,】【弟】【弟】【写】【道】【:】【“】【一】【(】【位】【)】【蚂】【蚁】【,】【一】【(】【名】【)】【甲】【虫】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【望】【着】【这】【些】【搭】【配】【不】【当】【的】【词】【语】【,】【我】【严】【肃】【地】【质】【问】【他】【为】【何】【这】【样】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【什】【么】【也】【不】【说】【了】【,】【拿】【着】【本】【子】【回】【了】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【,】【样】【子】【有】【点】【委】【屈】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【刚】【才】【的】【话】【过】【重】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【聊】【间】【,】【我】【打】【开】【电】【视】【。】【呀】【!】【竟】【是】【久】【违】【的】【动】【画】【片】【,】【我】【饶】【有】【兴】【趣】【地】【看】【着】【,】【什】【么】【“】【熊】【先】【生】【”】【“】【狼】【外】【婆】【”】【,】【让】【我】【有】【重】【拾】【童】【心】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【顿】【时】【明】【白】【了】【,】【弟】【弟】【写】【得】【一】【点】【也】【没】【错】【,】【蚂】【蚁】【确】【实】【可】【以】【论】【位】【,】【甲】【虫】【也】【确】【实】【可】【以】【论】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【到】【这】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【想】【起】【了】【西】【西】【。】【西】【西】【是】【一】【位】【童】【心】【未】【泯】【的】【香】【港】【女】【作】【家】【,】【今】【年】【刚】【好】【6】【0】【岁】【,】【她】【写】【了】【一】【首】【非】【常】【有】【趣】【的】【诗】【叫】【《】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【》】【。】【在】【诗】【中】【,】【她】【大】【胆】【发】【问】【:】【“】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【枚】【白】【菜】【一】【块】【鸡】【蛋】【 】【一】【只】【葱】【 】【一】【个】【胡】【椒】【粉】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【架】【飞】【鸟】【 】【一】【管】【柳】【子】【树】【一】【顶】【太】【阳】【一】【巴】【斗】【骤】【雨】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【株】【柠】【檬】【茶】【 】【一】【双】【大】【力】【水】【手】【一】【顿】【雪】【糕】【、】【苏】【打】【一】【亩】【阿】【华】【田】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【朵】【雨】【伞】【一】【束】【雪】【花】【 】【一】【瓶】【银】【河】【 】【一】【葫】【芦】【宇】【宙】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【头】【训】【导】【主】【任】【一】【只】【七】【省】【巡】【按】【一】【匹】【将】【军】【一】【尾】【皇】【帝】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【龙】【眼】【吉】【祥】【龙】【须】【糖】【万】【岁】【万】【岁】【万】【万】【岁】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【说】【可】【不】【可】【以】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【自】【然】【远】【不】【止】【文】【章】【所】【列】【。】【其】【所】【选】【四】【题】【,】【有】【一】【个】【共】【同】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【(】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【的】【代】【表】【)】【和】【“】【我】【”】【(】【成】【年】【人】【的】【代】【表】【)】【,】【各】【自】【的】【答】【案】【是】【不】【同】【的】【。】【以】【第】【一】【题】【为】【例】【,】【用】【关】【联】【词】【“】【如】【果】【…】【…】【就】【…】【…】【”】【造】【句】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【答】【案】【是】【“】【如】【果】【有】【人】【打】【我】【一】【拳】【,】【我】【就】【要】【还】【他】【一】【拳】【”】【。】【就】【语】【法】【意】【义】【而】【言】【,】【这】【是】【假】【设】【条】【件】【句】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【这】【样】【造】【句】【是】【不】【错】【的】【。】【然】【而】【,】【对】【这】【样】【的】【“】【答】【案】【”】【,】【“】【老】【师】【”】【并】【不】【认】【同】【(】【“】【被】【老】【师】【打】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【惊】【叹】【号】【”】【)】【,】【作】【为】【哥】【哥】【(】【或】【姐】【姐】【)】【的】【“】【我】【”】【也】【不】【认】【同】【(】【“】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【处】【世】【尚】【浅】【,】【很】【多】【道】【理】【你】【不】【懂】【”】【)】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【不】【服】【,】【根】【据】【“】【天】【平】【”】【两】【边】【对】【等】【的】【原】【理】【加】【以】【“】【反】【驳】【”】【。】【显】【然】【,】【这】【里】【争】【执】【的】【焦】【点】【不】【在】【句】【子】【的】【形】【式】【,】【而】【在】【于】【句】【子】【的】【内】【容】【,】【其】【中】【涉】【及】【处】【世】【为】【人】【的】【“】【道】【理】【”】【。】【那】【么】【,】【争】【执】【双】【方】【究】【竟】【谁】【是】【有】【理】【方】【呢】【?】【说】【起】【来】【双】【方】【都】【振】【振】【有】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【下】【三】【题】【也】【大】【致】【如】【此】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【和】【“】【我】【”】【答】【案】【不】【同】【,】【又】【各】【自】【成】【“】【理】【”】【。】【客】【观】【地】【说】【,】【两】【者】【比】【较】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【答】【案】【比】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【答】【案】【要】【准】【确】【一】【些】【,】【深】【刻】【一】【些】【,】【全】【面】【一】【些】【。】【然】【而】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【不】【足】【”】【是】【出】【乎】【自】【然】【的】【,】【合】【乎】【儿】【童】【年】【龄】【段】【的】【,】【因】【而】【是】【不】【可】【能】【超】【越】【的】【。】【恰】【恰】【是】【这】【些】【“】【不】【足】【”】【闪】【现】【出】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【纯】【真】【、】【率】【直】【和】【勇】【敢】【的】【童】【心】【童】【趣】【。】【而】【成】【人】【的】【“】【成】【熟】【”】【则】【往】【往】【带】【有】【伪】【饰】【、】【世】【故】【和】【功】【利】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【敢】【于】【直】【言】【“】【别】【人】【打】【我】【,】【我】【就】【还】【手】【!】【”】【而】【承】【认】【对】【此】【表】【示】【不】【能】【理】【解】【,】【或】【以】【为】【不】【合】【“】【世】【故】【道】【理】【”】【,】【但】【是】【在】【街】【面】【上】【就】【“】【有】【人】【大】【打】【出】【手】【”】【,】【言】【行】【不】【一】【的】【情】【形】【屡】【有】【发】【生】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【敢】【于】【批】【评】【“】【博】【士】【帽】【不】【好】【看】【,】【还】【不】【如】【我】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【呢】【”】【,】【追】【求】【的】【是】【快】【乐】【的】【直】【觉】【。】【而】【成】【人】【在】【追】【求】【“】【做】【博】【士】【,】【戴】【博】【士】【帽】【”】【的】【时】【候】【,】【却】【难】【掩】【“】【功】【利】【色】【彩】【”】【,】【其】【中】【含】【有】【多】【少】【苦】【涩】【和】【无】【奈】【。】【文】【章】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【疼】【爱】【有】【加】【,】【通】【过】【对】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【四】【道】【题】【的】【演】【绎】【,】【赞】【美】【“】【纯】【洁】【的】【童】【心】【”】【,】【“】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【”】【,】【指】【出】【这】【是】【一】【片】【“】【成】【年】【人】【无】【法】【介】【入】【的】【乐】【土】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【是】【孩】【子】【就】【应】【该】【有】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【。】【法】【国】【教】【育】【家】【卢】【梭】【说】【:】【“】【把】【孩】【子】【看】【做】【孩】【子】【。】【”】【(】【《】【爱】【弥】【儿】【》】【)】【对】【待】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【应】【该】【从】【两】【个】【方】【面】【看】【,】【一】【方】【面】【从】【成】【人】【角】【度】【看】【,】【从】【教】【育】【者】【角】【度】【看】【,】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【(】【或】【“】【姐】【姐】【”】【)】【也】【罢】【,】【老】【师】【也】【罢】【,】【所】【有】【年】【长】【的】【人】【都】【应】【该】【认】【识】【并】【尊】【重】【孩】【子】【的】【天】【性】【,】【遵】【循】【孩】【子】【成】【长】【的】【规】【律】【。】【对】【于】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【,】【既】【不】【能】【拔】【苗】【助】【长】【,】【也】【不】【能】【越】【俎】【代】【庖】【,】【更】【不】【能】【横】【加】【打】【压】【,】【而】【只】【能】【顺】【其】【自】【然】【,】【因】【势】【利】【导】【。】【在】【这】【方】【面】【,】【文】【章】【作】【者】【(】【“】【我】【”】【)】【的】【态】【度】【是】【正】【确】【的】【。】【“】【我】【”】【对】【于】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【据】【理】【力】【争】【,】【“】【反】【驳】【”】【也】【好】【,】【“】【反】【对】【”】【也】【罢】【,】【没】【有】【施】【威】【加】【压】【,】【而】【是】【设】【法】【去】【理】【解】【他】【的】【思】【维】【过】【程】【(】【“】【有】【所】【触】【动】【”】【,】【“】【呆】【望】【着】【他】【”】【,】【“】【不】【禁】【哑】【然】【失】【笑】【”】【)】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【即】【使】【认】【识】【有】【误】【(】【“】【尚】【不】【懂】【得】【措】【词】【之】【美】【”】【)】【,】【也】【能】【看】【到】【他】【率】【直】【的】【一】【面】【(】【“】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【”】【)】【。】【特】【别】【是】【从】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【委】【屈】【”】【中】【,】【“】【我】【”】【能】【自】【省】【言】【辞】【过】【重】【,】【是】【自】【己】【缺】【少】【“】【童】【心】【”】【,】【错】【怪】【了】【他】【。】【“】【我】【”】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【自】【省】【自】【责】【态】【度】【,】【不】【禁】【让】【人】【联】【想】【到】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【散】【文】【名】【篇】【《】【风】【筝】【》】【。】【那】【篇】【文】【章】【说】【的】【也】【是】【一】【个】【哥】【哥】【和】【弟】【弟】【的】【故】【事】【。】【十】【岁】【的】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【喜】【欢】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【,】【偷】【偷】【地】【制】【作】【,】【却】【被】【不】【以】【为】【然】【的】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【粗】【暴】【地】【将】【风】【筝】【翅】【骨】【折】【断】【、】【踏】【扁】【。】【多】【少】【年】【后】【,】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【认】【识】【到】【“】【玩】【具】【是】【儿】【童】【的】【天】【使】【”】【,】【深】【深】【自】【责】【当】【年】【行】【为】【的】【不】【端】【,】【由】【此】【心】【情】【沉】【重】【,】【愧】【疚】【不】【已】【。】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【时】【代】【不】【同】【,】【今】【天】【的】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【所】【表】【现】【的】【宽】【容】【、】【理】【解】【和】【支】【持】【,】【已】【非】【昔】【日】【可】【比】【。】【文】【章】【末】【尾】【一】【句】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【弟】【弟】【”】【,】【你】【说】【可】【以】【不】【可】【以】【呢】【?】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【,】【关】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【溢】【于】【言】【表】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【对】【待】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【,】【自】【然】【还】【有】【另】【外】【一】【面】【,】【即】【孩】【子】【如】【何】【对】【待】【自】【身】【。】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【正】【处】【于】【成】【长】【期】【,】【从】【幼】【稚】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【是】【人】【生】【必】【经】【阶】【段】【。】【在】【这】【一】【时】【期】【,】【有】【两】【点】【是】【需】【要】【注】【意】【的】【,】【一】【是】【独】【立】【性】【,】【一】【是】【可】【接】【受】【性】【。】【从】【独】【立】【性】【说】【,】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【要】【敢】【于】【发】【表】【意】【见】【,】【坦】【诚】【、】【率】【直】【。】【从】【可】【接】【受】【性】【说】【,】【又】【要】【知】【道】【受】【知】【识】【局】【限】【,】【阅】【历】【局】【限】【,】【或】【有】【不】【周】【全】【之】【处】【,】【甚】【至】【失】【误】【。】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【要】【善】【于】【听】【取】【批】【评】【和】【指】【导】【,】【以】【求】【取】【得】【进】【步】【和】【完】【善】【,】【这】【其】【中】【最】【关】【键】【的】【是】【遇】【事】【讲】【“】【理】【”】【。】【在】【文】【章】【中】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【表】【现】【是】【可】【圈】【可】【点】【的】【。】【在】【完】【成】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【的】【答】【案】【时】【,】【他】【循】【理】【而】【为】【,】【据】【理】【力】【争】【,】【绝】【不】【无】【理】【取】【闹】【。】【有】【了】【这】【个】【“】【理】【”】【字】【,】【就】【将】【“】【独】【立】【”】【和】【“】【偏】【执】【”】【,】【“】【骄】【纵】【”】【和】【“】【谦】【让】【”】【,】【“】【自】【私】【”】【和】【“】【利】【他】【”】【,】【“】【放】【任】【”】【和】【“】【规】【范】【”】【,】【“】【极】【端】【”】【和】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【等】【等】【区】【别】【开】【来】【,】【或】【有】【失】【误】【,】【也】【能】【纠】【正】【。】【对】【于】【当】【下】【青】【少】【年】【中】【普】【遍】【存】【在】【的】【“】【独】【生】【子】【女】【”】【综】【合】【征】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【表】【现】【可】【谓】【对】【“】【症】【”】【下】【药】【。】【你】【看】【,】【在】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【受】【到】【批】【评】【时】【,】【尽】【管】【“】【委】【屈】【”】【(】【事】【实】【证】【明】【,】【他】【没】【有】【错】【)】【,】【也】【能】【容】【忍】【(】【“】【弟】【弟】【什】【么】【也】【不】【说】【”】【)】【,】【期】【待】【正】【确】【的】【结】【论】【。】【这】【正】【是】【儿】【童】【“】【理】【”】【性】【的】【可】【贵】【表】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【》】【一】【文】【立】【意】【高】【远】【,】【且】【有】【现】【实】【教】【育】【意】【义】【,】【已】【如】【上】【述】【。】【选】【材】【精】【当】【,】【新】【鲜】【活】【泼】【也】【是】【特】【色】【。】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【在】【不】【计】【其】【数】【中】【仅】【是】【四】【题】【,】【全】【是】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【成】【长】【的】【话】【题】【,】【“】【以】【少】【少】【件】【胜】【多】【多】【件】【”】【(】【郑】【板】【桥】【语】【)】【,】【充】【分】【表】【现】【了】【它】【选】【材】【的】【典】【型】【价】【值】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【段】【引】【用】【香】【港】【作】【家】【西】【西】【的】【一】【首】【诗】【《】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【》】【,】【说】【的】【也】【是】【量】【词】【运】【用】【,】【与】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【中】【的】【“】【量】【词】【训】【练】【”】【无】【缝】【对】【接】【,】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【。】【这】【首】【诗】【是】【儿】【童】【文】【学】【精】【品】【。】【诗】【中】【妙】【语】【连】【篇】【:】【“】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【头】【训】【导】【主】【任】【一】【只】【七】【省】【巡】【按】【一】【匹】【将】【军】【一】【尾】【皇】【帝】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【龙】【眼】【吉】【祥】【龙】【须】【糖】【万】【岁】【万】【岁】【万】【万】【岁】【?】【”】【尽】【显】【童】【趣】【,】【令】【人】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【。】【引】【在】【此】【处】【,】【不】【仅】【有】【力】【地】【呼】【应】【了】【文】【章】【作】【者】【的】【观】【点】【,】【还】【开】【拓】【了】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【视】【野】【,】【行】【文】【的】【同】【时】【,】【为】【读】【者】【贡】【献】【了】【一】【份】【精】【美】【的】【精】【神】【食】【粮】【。】【文】【章】【作】【者】【年】【仅】【1】【4】【岁】【,】【下】【笔】【从】【容】【,】【见】【识】【非】【凡】【,】【能】【有】【此】【阅】【读】【与】【写】【作】【的】【功】【力】【,】【实】【为】【难】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【饶】【有】【情】【趣】【的】【作】【文】【。】【文】【章】【围】【绕】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【展】【开】【。】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【共】【有】【四】【道】【题】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【都】【做】【了】【答】【案】【。】【只】【是】【“】【我】【”】【(】【哥】【哥】【或】【姐】【姐】【)】【对】【这】【些】【答】【案】【并】【不】【满】【意】【,】【有】【的】【则】【不】【同】【意】【,】【也】【有】【不】【理】【解】【的】【。】【借】【助】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【又】【把】【这】【些】【题】【目】【和】【答】【案】【呈】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【,】【让】【那】【些】【做】【老】【师】【的】【,】【做】【父】【母】【的】【,】【包】【括】【所】【有】【做】【长】【辈】【的】【,】【都】【受】【到】【考】【问】【。】【对】【于】【同】【样】【的】【问】【题】【,】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【同】【成】【年】【人】【往】【往】【有】【不】【同】【的】【答】【案】【,】【是】【是】【非】【非】【,】【孰】【对】【孰】【错】【,】【值】【得】【每】【个】【人】【深】【入】【思】【考】【,】【并】【从】【中】【受】【到】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【且】【看】【文】【章】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【 】【天】【津】【树】【人】【中】【学】【 】【任】【翀】【怡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【在】【作】【业】【本】【里】【写】【道】【:】【“】【如】【果】【有】【人】【打】【我】【一】【拳】【,】【我】【就】【要】【还】【他】【一】【拳】【。】【”】【这】【是】【弟】【弟】【用】【“】【如】【果】【…】【…】【就】【…】【…】【”】【造】【的】【一】【句】【话】【,】【被】【老】【师】【打】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【惊】【叹】【号】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【拿】【起】【作】【业】【本】【,】【望】【着】【字】【迹】【工】【整】【的】【造】【句】【说】【:】【“】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【处】【世】【尚】【浅】【,】【很】【多】【道】【理】【你】【不】【懂】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【却】【托】【起】【下】【巴】【反】【驳】【我】【:】【“】【我】【怎】【么】【不】【懂】【。】【学】【校】【里】【做】【过】【天】【平】【实】【验】【,】【右】【边】【添】【上】【几】【个】【砝】【码】【,】【左】【边】【也】【得】【添】【上】【几】【个】【砝】【码】【。】【别】【人】【打】【我】【,】【我】【就】【还】【手】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【时】【无】【言】【以】【对】【,】【因】【为】【我】【感】【到】【有】【所】【触】【动】【,】【以】【至】【于】【不】【想】【把】【那】【些】【世】【故】【的】【道】【理】【灌】【进】【这】【颗】【纯】【洁】【的】【童】【心】【,】【只】【能】【呆】【望】【着】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【以】【后】【,】【每】【当】【我】【看】【到】【街】【上】【有】【人】【大】【打】【出】【手】【,】【我】【就】【会】【想】【起】【弟】【弟】【的】【造】【句】【,】【不】【禁】【哑】【然】【失】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【“】【组】【词】【造】【句】【”】【里】【有】【这】【样】【一】【道】【题】【—】【—】【写】【一】【句】【话】【,】【其】【中】【必】【须】【提】【到】【窗】【。】【我】【指】【导】【他】【说】【:】【“】【眼】【睛】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【立】【刻】【反】【对】【:】【“】【眼】【睛】【怎】【么】【能】【是】【心】【灵】【的】【窗】【户】【,】【心】【里】【有】【话】【,】【眼】【睛】【能】【表】【达】【吗】【?】【我】【觉】【得】【嘴】【巴】【才】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【,】【心】【里】【有】【话】【就】【能】【讲】【出】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【哑】【口】【无】【言】【了】【。】【弟】【弟】【写】【道】【:】【“】【嘴】【巴】【是】【心】【灵】【之】【窗】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【太】【小】【,】【尚】【不】【懂】【得】【措】【词】【之】【美】【,】【但】【他】【却】【能】【用】【嘴】【巴】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【的】【学】【校】【让】【每】【个】【学】【生】【都】【谈】【各】【自】【的】【理】【想】【。】【弟】【弟】【为】【这】【犯】【了】【愁】【,】【跑】【来】【问】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【长】【大】【后】【,】【你】【想】【不】【想】【当】【科】【学】【家】【、】【文】【学】【家】【、】【艺】【术】【家】【或】【者】【做】【博】【士】【,】【戴】【博】【士】【帽】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【坚】【决】【地】【回】【答】【:】【“】【不】【想】【,】【博】【士】【帽】【不】【好】【看】【,】【还】【不】【如】【我】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【发】【觉】【问】【下】【去】【也】【没】【什】【么】【意】【思】【,】【难】【道】【在】【孩】【子】【们】【心】【中】【,】【代】【表】【学】【识】【的】【博】【士】【帽】【真】【就】【不】【如】【一】【顶】【普】【通】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【?】【难】【怪】【很】【多】【成】【年】【人】【喜】【欢】【回】【忆】【童】【年】【,】【回】【忆】【那】【段】【没】【有】【任】【何】【功】【利】【色】【彩】【的】【岁】【月】【,】【那】【片】【成】【年】【人】【无】【法】【介】【入】【的】【乐】【土】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【,】【弟】【弟】【只】【想】【做】【个】【快】【乐】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【或】【者】【,】【弟】【弟】【更】【想】【做】【个】【能】【让】【别】【人】【快】【乐】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【匆】【忙】【跑】【到】【我】【跟】【前】【,】【让】【我】【帮】【他】【检】【查】【作】【业】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【是】【组】【量】【词】【训】【练】【,】【弟】【弟】【写】【道】【:】【“】【一】【(】【位】【)】【蚂】【蚁】【,】【一】【(】【名】【)】【甲】【虫】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【望】【着】【这】【些】【搭】【配】【不】【当】【的】【词】【语】【,】【我】【严】【肃】【地】【质】【问】【他】【为】【何】【这】【样】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【弟】【弟】【什】【么】【也】【不】【说】【了】【,】【拿】【着】【本】【子】【回】【了】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【,】【样】【子】【有】【点】【委】【屈】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【刚】【才】【的】【话】【过】【重】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【聊】【间】【,】【我】【打】【开】【电】【视】【。】【呀】【!】【竟】【是】【久】【违】【的】【动】【画】【片】【,】【我】【饶】【有】【兴】【趣】【地】【看】【着】【,】【什】【么】【“】【熊】【先】【生】【”】【“】【狼】【外】【婆】【”】【,】【让】【我】【有】【重】【拾】【童】【心】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【顿】【时】【明】【白】【了】【,】【弟】【弟】【写】【得】【一】【点】【也】【没】【错】【,】【蚂】【蚁】【确】【实】【可】【以】【论】【位】【,】【甲】【虫】【也】【确】【实】【可】【以】【论】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【到】【这】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【想】【起】【了】【西】【西】【。】【西】【西】【是】【一】【位】【童】【心】【未】【泯】【的】【香】【港】【女】【作】【家】【,】【今】【年】【刚】【好】【6】【0】【岁】【,】【她】【写】【了】【一】【首】【非】【常】【有】【趣】【的】【诗】【叫】【《】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【》】【。】【在】【诗】【中】【,】【她】【大】【胆】【发】【问】【:】【“】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【枚】【白】【菜】【一】【块】【鸡】【蛋】【 】【一】【只】【葱】【 】【一】【个】【胡】【椒】【粉】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【架】【飞】【鸟】【 】【一】【管】【柳】【子】【树】【一】【顶】【太】【阳】【一】【巴】【斗】【骤】【雨】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【株】【柠】【檬】【茶】【 】【一】【双】【大】【力】【水】【手】【一】【顿】【雪】【糕】【、】【苏】【打】【一】【亩】【阿】【华】【田】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【朵】【雨】【伞】【一】【束】【雪】【花】【 】【一】【瓶】【银】【河】【 】【一】【葫】【芦】【宇】【宙】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【头】【训】【导】【主】【任】【一】【只】【七】【省】【巡】【按】【一】【匹】【将】【军】【一】【尾】【皇】【帝】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【龙】【眼】【吉】【祥】【龙】【须】【糖】【万】【岁】【万】【岁】【万】【万】【岁】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【说】【可】【不】【可】【以】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【自】【然】【远】【不】【止】【文】【章】【所】【列】【。】【其】【所】【选】【四】【题】【,】【有】【一】【个】【共】【同】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【(】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【的】【代】【表】【)】【和】【“】【我】【”】【(】【成】【年】【人】【的】【代】【表】【)】【,】【各】【自】【的】【答】【案】【是】【不】【同】【的】【。】【以】【第】【一】【题】【为】【例】【,】【用】【关】【联】【词】【“】【如】【果】【…】【…】【就】【…】【…】【”】【造】【句】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【答】【案】【是】【“】【如】【果】【有】【人】【打】【我】【一】【拳】【,】【我】【就】【要】【还】【他】【一】【拳】【”】【。】【就】【语】【法】【意】【义】【而】【言】【,】【这】【是】【假】【设】【条】【件】【句】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【这】【样】【造】【句】【是】【不】【错】【的】【。】【然】【而】【,】【对】【这】【样】【的】【“】【答】【案】【”】【,】【“】【老】【师】【”】【并】【不】【认】【同】【(】【“】【被】【老】【师】【打】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【惊】【叹】【号】【”】【)】【,】【作】【为】【哥】【哥】【(】【或】【姐】【姐】【)】【的】【“】【我】【”】【也】【不】【认】【同】【(】【“】【弟】【弟】【,】【你】【处】【世】【尚】【浅】【,】【很】【多】【道】【理】【你】【不】【懂】【”】【)】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【不】【服】【,】【根】【据】【“】【天】【平】【”】【两】【边】【对】【等】【的】【原】【理】【加】【以】【“】【反】【驳】【”】【。】【显】【然】【,】【这】【里】【争】【执】【的】【焦】【点】【不】【在】【句】【子】【的】【形】【式】【,】【而】【在】【于】【句】【子】【的】【内】【容】【,】【其】【中】【涉】【及】【处】【世】【为】【人】【的】【“】【道】【理】【”】【。】【那】【么】【,】【争】【执】【双】【方】【究】【竟】【谁】【是】【有】【理】【方】【呢】【?】【说】【起】【来】【双】【方】【都】【振】【振】【有】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【下】【三】【题】【也】【大】【致】【如】【此】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【和】【“】【我】【”】【答】【案】【不】【同】【,】【又】【各】【自】【成】【“】【理】【”】【。】【客】【观】【地】【说】【,】【两】【者】【比】【较】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【答】【案】【比】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【答】【案】【要】【准】【确】【一】【些】【,】【深】【刻】【一】【些】【,】【全】【面】【一】【些】【。】【然】【而】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【不】【足】【”】【是】【出】【乎】【自】【然】【的】【,】【合】【乎】【儿】【童】【年】【龄】【段】【的】【,】【因】【而】【是】【不】【可】【能】【超】【越】【的】【。】【恰】【恰】【是】【这】【些】【“】【不】【足】【”】【闪】【现】【出】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【纯】【真】【、】【率】【直】【和】【勇】【敢】【的】【童】【心】【童】【趣】【。】【而】【成】【人】【的】【“】【成】【熟】【”】【则】【往】【往】【带】【有】【伪】【饰】【、】【世】【故】【和】【功】【利】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【敢】【于】【直】【言】【“】【别】【人】【打】【我】【,】【我】【就】【还】【手】【!】【”】【而】【承】【认】【对】【此】【表】【示】【不】【能】【理】【解】【,】【或】【以】【为】【不】【合】【“】【世】【故】【道】【理】【”】【,】【但】【是】【在】【街】【面】【上】【就】【“】【有】【人】【大】【打】【出】【手】【”】【,】【言】【行】【不】【一】【的】【情】【形】【屡】【有】【发】【生】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【敢】【于】【批】【评】【“】【博】【士】【帽】【不】【好】【看】【,】【还】【不】【如】【我】【的】【太】【阳】【帽】【呢】【”】【,】【追】【求】【的】【是】【快】【乐】【的】【直】【觉】【。】【而】【成】【人】【在】【追】【求】【“】【做】【博】【士】【,】【戴】【博】【士】【帽】【”】【的】【时】【候】【,】【却】【难】【掩】【“】【功】【利】【色】【彩】【”】【,】【其】【中】【含】【有】【多】【少】【苦】【涩】【和】【无】【奈】【。】【文】【章】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【疼】【爱】【有】【加】【,】【通】【过】【对】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【四】【道】【题】【的】【演】【绎】【,】【赞】【美】【“】【纯】【洁】【的】【童】【心】【”】【,】【“】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【”】【,】【指】【出】【这】【是】【一】【片】【“】【成】【年】【人】【无】【法】【介】【入】【的】【乐】【土】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【是】【孩】【子】【就】【应】【该】【有】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【。】【法】【国】【教】【育】【家】【卢】【梭】【说】【:】【“】【把】【孩】【子】【看】【做】【孩】【子】【。】【”】【(】【《】【爱】【弥】【儿】【》】【)】【对】【待】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【应】【该】【从】【两】【个】【方】【面】【看】【,】【一】【方】【面】【从】【成】【人】【角】【度】【看】【,】【从】【教】【育】【者】【角】【度】【看】【,】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【(】【或】【“】【姐】【姐】【”】【)】【也】【罢】【,】【老】【师】【也】【罢】【,】【所】【有】【年】【长】【的】【人】【都】【应】【该】【认】【识】【并】【尊】【重】【孩】【子】【的】【天】【性】【,】【遵】【循】【孩】【子】【成】【长】【的】【规】【律】【。】【对】【于】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【,】【既】【不】【能】【拔】【苗】【助】【长】【,】【也】【不】【能】【越】【俎】【代】【庖】【,】【更】【不】【能】【横】【加】【打】【压】【,】【而】【只】【能】【顺】【其】【自】【然】【,】【因】【势】【利】【导】【。】【在】【这】【方】【面】【,】【文】【章】【作】【者】【(】【“】【我】【”】【)】【的】【态】【度】【是】【正】【确】【的】【。】【“】【我】【”】【对】【于】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【据】【理】【力】【争】【,】【“】【反】【驳】【”】【也】【好】【,】【“】【反】【对】【”】【也】【罢】【,】【没】【有】【施】【威】【加】【压】【,】【而】【是】【设】【法】【去】【理】【解】【他】【的】【思】【维】【过】【程】【(】【“】【有】【所】【触】【动】【”】【,】【“】【呆】【望】【着】【他】【”】【,】【“】【不】【禁】【哑】【然】【失】【笑】【”】【)】【。】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【即】【使】【认】【识】【有】【误】【(】【“】【尚】【不】【懂】【得】【措】【词】【之】【美】【”】【)】【,】【也】【能】【看】【到】【他】【率】【直】【的】【一】【面】【(】【“】【大】【胆】【地】【说】【出】【心】【里】【话】【”】【)】【。】【特】【别】【是】【从】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【“】【委】【屈】【”】【中】【,】【“】【我】【”】【能】【自】【省】【言】【辞】【过】【重】【,】【是】【自】【己】【缺】【少】【“】【童】【心】【”】【,】【错】【怪】【了】【他】【。】【“】【我】【”】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【自】【省】【自】【责】【态】【度】【,】【不】【禁】【让】【人】【联】【想】【到】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【散】【文】【名】【篇】【《】【风】【筝】【》】【。】【那】【篇】【文】【章】【说】【的】【也】【是】【一】【个】【哥】【哥】【和】【弟】【弟】【的】【故】【事】【。】【十】【岁】【的】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【喜】【欢】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【,】【偷】【偷】【地】【制】【作】【,】【却】【被】【不】【以】【为】【然】【的】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【粗】【暴】【地】【将】【风】【筝】【翅】【骨】【折】【断】【、】【踏】【扁】【。】【多】【少】【年】【后】【,】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【认】【识】【到】【“】【玩】【具】【是】【儿】【童】【的】【天】【使】【”】【,】【深】【深】【自】【责】【当】【年】【行】【为】【的】【不】【端】【,】【由】【此】【心】【情】【沉】【重】【,】【愧】【疚】【不】【已】【。】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【时】【代】【不】【同】【,】【今】【天】【的】【“】【哥】【哥】【”】【对】【“】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【所】【表】【现】【的】【宽】【容】【、】【理】【解】【和】【支】【持】【,】【已】【非】【昔】【日】【可】【比】【。】【文】【章】【末】【尾】【一】【句】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【弟】【弟】【”】【,】【你】【说】【可】【以】【不】【可】【以】【呢】【?】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【,】【关】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【溢】【于】【言】【表】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【对】【待】【“】【孩】【子】【气】【”】【,】【自】【然】【还】【有】【另】【外】【一】【面】【,】【即】【孩】【子】【如】【何】【对】【待】【自】【身】【。】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【正】【处】【于】【成】【长】【期】【,】【从】【幼】【稚】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【是】【人】【生】【必】【经】【阶】【段】【。】【在】【这】【一】【时】【期】【,】【有】【两】【点】【是】【需】【要】【注】【意】【的】【,】【一】【是】【独】【立】【性】【,】【一】【是】【可】【接】【受】【性】【。】【从】【独】【立】【性】【说】【,】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【要】【敢】【于】【发】【表】【意】【见】【,】【坦】【诚】【、】【率】【直】【。】【从】【可】【接】【受】【性】【说】【,】【又】【要】【知】【道】【受】【知】【识】【局】【限】【,】【阅】【历】【局】【限】【,】【或】【有】【不】【周】【全】【之】【处】【,】【甚】【至】【失】【误】【。】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【要】【善】【于】【听】【取】【批】【评】【和】【指】【导】【,】【以】【求】【取】【得】【进】【步】【和】【完】【善】【,】【这】【其】【中】【最】【关】【键】【的】【是】【遇】【事】【讲】【“】【理】【”】【。】【在】【文】【章】【中】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【表】【现】【是】【可】【圈】【可】【点】【的】【。】【在】【完】【成】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【的】【答】【案】【时】【,】【他】【循】【理】【而】【为】【,】【据】【理】【力】【争】【,】【绝】【不】【无】【理】【取】【闹】【。】【有】【了】【这】【个】【“】【理】【”】【字】【,】【就】【将】【“】【独】【立】【”】【和】【“】【偏】【执】【”】【,】【“】【骄】【纵】【”】【和】【“】【谦】【让】【”】【,】【“】【自】【私】【”】【和】【“】【利】【他】【”】【,】【“】【放】【任】【”】【和】【“】【规】【范】【”】【,】【“】【极】【端】【”】【和】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【等】【等】【区】【别】【开】【来】【,】【或】【有】【失】【误】【,】【也】【能】【纠】【正】【。】【对】【于】【当】【下】【青】【少】【年】【中】【普】【遍】【存】【在】【的】【“】【独】【生】【子】【女】【”】【综】【合】【征】【,】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【的】【表】【现】【可】【谓】【对】【“】【症】【”】【下】【药】【。】【你】【看】【,】【在】【“】【弟】【弟】【”】【受】【到】【批】【评】【时】【,】【尽】【管】【“】【委】【屈】【”】【(】【事】【实】【证】【明】【,】【他】【没】【有】【错】【)】【,】【也】【能】【容】【忍】【(】【“】【弟】【弟】【什】【么】【也】【不】【说】【”】【)】【,】【期】【待】【正】【确】【的】【结】【论】【。】【这】【正】【是】【儿】【童】【“】【理】【”】【性】【的】【可】【贵】【表】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【弟】【弟】【的】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【》】【一】【文】【立】【意】【高】【远】【,】【且】【有】【现】【实】【教】【育】【意】【义】【,】【已】【如】【上】【述】【。】【选】【材】【精】【当】【,】【新】【鲜】【活】【泼】【也】【是】【特】【色】【。】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【在】【不】【计】【其】【数】【中】【仅】【是】【四】【题】【,】【全】【是】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【成】【长】【的】【话】【题】【,】【“】【以】【少】【少】【件】【胜】【多】【多】【件】【”】【(】【郑】【板】【桥】【语】【)】【,】【充】【分】【表】【现】【了】【它】【选】【材】【的】【典】【型】【价】【值】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【段】【引】【用】【香】【港】【作】【家】【西】【西】【的】【一】【首】【诗】【《】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【》】【,】【说】【的】【也】【是】【量】【词】【运】【用】【,】【与】【“】【家】【庭】【作】【业】【”】【中】【的】【“】【量】【词】【训】【练】【”】【无】【缝】【对】【接】【,】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【。】【这】【首】【诗】【是】【儿】【童】【文】【学】【精】【品】【。】【诗】【中】【妙】【语】【连】【篇】【:】【“】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【一】【头】【训】【导】【主】【任】【一】【只】【七】【省】【巡】【按】【一】【匹】【将】【军】【一】【尾】【皇】【帝】【?】【/】【可】【不】【可】【以】【说】【/】【龙】【眼】【吉】【祥】【龙】【须】【糖】【万】【岁】【万】【岁】【万】【万】【岁】【?】【”】【尽】【显】【童】【趣】【,】【令】【人】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【。】【引】【在】【此】【处】【,】【不】【仅】【有】【力】【地】【呼】【应】【了】【文】【章】【作】【者】【的】【观】【点】【,】【还】【开】【拓】【了】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【视】【野】【,】【行】【文】【的】【同】【时】【,】【为】【读】【者】【贡】【献】【了】【一】【份】【精】【美】【的】【精】【神】【食】【粮】【。】【文】【章】【作】【者】【年】【仅】【1】【4】【岁】【,】【下】【笔】【从】【容】【,】【见】【识】【非】【凡】【,】【能】【有】【此】【阅】【读】【与】【写】【作】【的】【功】【力】【,】【实】【为】【难】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】感冒发烧【<】【p】【>】【如】【果】【我】【是】【他】【,】【当】【看】【到】【野】【人】【用】【自】【己】【同】【伴】【的】【肉】【开】【宴】【会】【时】【,】【我】【不】【可】【能】【像】【他】【那】【样】【勇】【敢】【的】【站】【出】【来】【,】【与】【他】【们】【搏】【斗】【,】【因】【为】【我】【没】【那】【种】【胆】【量】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】

感冒发烧:【智能空调鞋】 空调鞋多少钱一双

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